Hi, all! After a few months we finally have a new track to unleash! Twist The Knife.

Please do have a listen. If you have any suggestions as to how we could improve the track, please do feel free to share. Always up for constrictive criticism.

Either way, hope you enjoy!

 

The vocs could sound more upfront and the sn could have a bit more attack (lowering the instruments in the center could help, apart from the drums, ofc).
Other than that .

 

It's a bit busy up the middle and competing with the vox. Killer track though.

 

@No Avenger, I thought exactly that about my vocals. I did do a take using a tape machine and saturation on my vox, which definitely did bring them more up close and personal. I kinda wish that I kept them that way. It can always be changed. There really are times when I wish I didn't waste my time with art in school and college, but then I wasn't interested in learning about music back then. It wasn't until I found digital/industrial music that got me interested in it. Everything that we do is off our own backs without any kind teaching. Just learning as we go along.

And what you and @Lois Lane said about the middle being too busy, I'm definitely feeling the same thing myself. One of those times where I really should trust my instincts. Both of your suggestions have been taken on-board, and I'm going to talk with our guitarist about it before I go and make changes.

But, as always, constructive criticism is very welcome, which you always give.

Thank you for taking the time out to have a listen, and commenting. Always appreciated. It's the way we can learn and grow.