New member, new track -- Please listen and comment

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by JB Sinleunam, Sep 20, 2016.

  1. JB Sinleunam

    JB Sinleunam Noisemaker

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    Hey guys, I'm back with new track.:bleh:
    Any comment is really welcome.

    Check it out and dont forget to drop your link so I can check yours too!

    Thanks

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  2. The Mazeman

    The Mazeman Kapellmeister

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    Here's my opinion :-
    1. Too 'muddy' mix. Which means 200Hz-260Hz range is not attenuated.
    2. Balance is not quite there.
    3. Too much emphasis on the transition effects.
    4. No presence of bass. Trap is all about bass frequencies.
    5. The reverb.... it's way too much.
    There is a lot of other things... but all would be artistic choices which I would make if this was my track.
    Referencing other "professional" tracks only helps when your mix is 87-93% done.
    Hope this helps.
     
  3. KungPaoFist

    KungPaoFist Audiosexual

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    Great vocalist, all of the funk is coming from her. Not sure about the beat, did you do this?
     
  4. JB Sinleunam

    JB Sinleunam Noisemaker

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    Of course this helps. Thank you so so much.
    Seriously when it comes to mixing I have no clue. haha.

    Again, thank you so so much for your comments. :no:
     
  5. JB Sinleunam

    JB Sinleunam Noisemaker

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    Hi. Which track are we talking about?
     
  6. wasgedn

    wasgedn Banned

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    seems you have it all together....now get sick....forget bout genre's box'es...bit more aggression in decisions and bit less rules....

    dont be so nice and polished..dirty grooves comes from play around not from follow the lines....
    also chill out like musik needs lofi too....
    i dont kno what im talknig bout...forgive me...but maybe its true...he he
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    but when you talk bout missing radio sound....give it to an SSL and
    Lexicon 480L
    mixing/master guy..

    peace
     
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  7. KungPaoFist

    KungPaoFist Audiosexual

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    I was trying to be funny but realizing how the dislike button comes across as being a dick. I don't get out much, my apologize...
     
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