New member, new track -- Please listen and comment

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by JB Sinleunam, Sep 20, 2016.

  1. JB Sinleunam

    JB Sinleunam Noisemaker

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    Hi guys, I'm very new here.
    Nice to meet you all.

    Allow me to introduce myself.
    My name is JB. I always love music since I was young.
    I teach myself guitar, keyboard but i still feel that i need more.
    I want to make my own music. That's my dream.

    I forgot my dream long time ago. Until one day i found Ableton Live, and it changes everything.
    One and a half year passed... I'm here in this forum with my first track, begging all of you to listen and just give me a comment.

    Here is my first (remix) track (Thai song) which possible because AudioWarez.



    Any comment, or like means the world to me.

    Thank you very very much.

    JB

    P.S.In case you want to talk to me more, give me some advice, or share your track, go here https://www.facebook.com/lunchbox78/
     
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  3. Fudsey Plange

    Fudsey Plange Audiosexual

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    OK! This is good but making it better needs some skillful and subtle work. The instrumentation is too dense for the vocal, and would benefit from a lighter touch on the compression and some EQ to open the frequency range for her voice. The voice is a nice voice but she's not very strong, so she could do with a touch of firming with the compessor and then softening her back with a vocal plate reverb. I'd think an EMT250 type plate emulation, just to make her shine, sparkle and float a bit more over the mix.

    Hope this helps.
     
  4. JB Sinleunam

    JB Sinleunam Noisemaker

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    This is very helpful. Thank you so much.
     
  5. JB Sinleunam

    JB Sinleunam Noisemaker

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    I learn a lot about mixing and mastering (and the more i learn, the more i know how much much more I need to learn)
    I hope I improve maybe a little bit from last year. :yes:
    So please help me guys just listen and leave me some comments. It would mean so much to me.
    Thank you so much.

    Here's my latest track. Hope you enjoy it.

     
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  6. JB Sinleunam

    JB Sinleunam Noisemaker

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    One more remix

     
  7. JB Sinleunam

    JB Sinleunam Noisemaker

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    This one is my original track.

     
  8. Deceptive

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    LUNCHBOX, you are talented and your music is nice:wink:
     
  9. Baali Soda

    Baali Soda Producer

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    I am no expert so not gonna pretend like one. Of the 4 tracks, I liked both Enchanting mixes (September Mix and Australian Mix) very much (former a bit more so than latter). To my untrained ears, they sounded the most pro sounding of the lot (plus enjoyed the overall uplifting vibe of the September mix).

    All the best for your future efforts :wink:
     
  10. JB Sinleunam

    JB Sinleunam Noisemaker

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    This means so much to me. I'm gonna print this out and put it on my wall. Seriously!
    Thank you so much.
     
  11. JB Sinleunam

    JB Sinleunam Noisemaker

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    And you said "my untrained ears" those 2 tracks are indeed a track that I spend most time on mixing & mastering. Excellent ears!
    And yes I'm gonna print out your comment and put it on my wall too! Much appreciated. Thanks.
     
  12. JB Sinleunam

    JB Sinleunam Noisemaker

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    Guys, check out my long lost remix.

     
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  13. JB Sinleunam

    JB Sinleunam Noisemaker

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    Hey... so quiet in here...
    I'm back with my new future house track. haha.
    I'm so proud of this one but...again I'd love to hear from you guys.

    Thank you for your time!

     
  14. JB Sinleunam

    JB Sinleunam Noisemaker

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    Hi guys, I'm back with my new track. It's called - Reminiscence -.
    I'm not sure what genre it is, haha.

    But first, happy new year to you all.
    Wishing all the best to you guys.

    Before stepping in new year, let's find time for Reminiscence!
    (how's that for the introduction haha)

    OK guys, just listen and give me some feedback.
    And do not hesitate to post your song if you want me to listen and give feedback to your song too.
    I'm very happy to do that.
    Let's support each other!

    Enjoy!
     
  15. spyfx

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    very nice,thank you for sharing ! :wink:,your track has some very positive vibes,wish you lots of inspiration & creativity for 2018 !:wink: :bow:
     
  16. jynx

    jynx Producer

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    Sounds rather pop.

    However!

    .."quite well executed and programmed tho"
     
  17. hani king

    hani king Kapellmeister

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    nice to have you here jb at AS AND kap khon khap

    you make nice tracks jb , i liked Reminiscence ,it has nice mood ,and very easy on the ears
    bass: great
    drums and fx : so sweet
    synth : i love it
    keep em coming jb
    (by the way few years back when i was traveling to Thailand on monthly basis (duty travels)
    i used to collected those plugins compilations cds titled computer music from a shop near
    grace hotel and and another shop at complex next to fortune hotel (third floor)
    ,i still have those cds from number 1- till 25 ,after that i stopped collecting them as i got my plugins from torrent
    before coming here,what a good old memories
     
  18. Thankful

    Thankful Platinum Record

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    You have the ability to create tracks. My general comment would be that all your tracks have an "old fashioned," numb and conformist sound to them. And also they seem to say nothing artistically. Just happy, Pop-y, bing-bing-bong. And I feel nothing and I think nothing. Art always provokes a reaction. If you're trying to create art and not just background, shopping mall musak, it needs to say something, sound new, different, dangerous, provocative. Be original, different and provocative. Make people love, you hate you, be excited by your work or even disgusted, that's OK too, you succeed as an artist. With the musak you posted I feel nothing at all. Get to work! :wink:
     
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  19. JB Sinleunam

    JB Sinleunam Noisemaker

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    Thank you for listening and support. Wish you lots of ideas too!
     
  20. JB Sinleunam

    JB Sinleunam Noisemaker

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    Thank you for listening and for your comments. That's very good to hear. Kob Khun Kab

    You know Bangkok very well! I think the complex you mentioned is the building called "Fortune Town",
    you can find every plug-in there.

    Thank you again and have a great new year!
     
  21. JB Sinleunam

    JB Sinleunam Noisemaker

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    Wow, that's what I'm waiting for!
    Thank you so so much for the comment!
    I've always felt like my track is missing something but i dont know what and why.
    The sound is good, synth is good- but... it's not there yet.

    "Art always provokes a reaction." -- exactly

    I think this time i'll go back and focus more on "idea" or "msg" rather than technique.
    Hope i'll do better next time.

    Thank you and thank you again!

    Get to work!!!
     
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