Hola,
So, I'm posting here 2 version of Lorde - Team remix I made. I need to pick one and run with it.

The difference is in the intro and on the buildup.
I would like you to help me pick which one is better...

Melody ver. buildup:

http://soundcloud.com/7stripes/lorde-team-seven-stripes

Vocal repeat ver buildup:

http://soundcloud.com/7stripes/lorde-team-seven-stripes-remix

Thank you very much!
p.s - feel free to give critics as well (need to change this, need to lower that etc..)

 

Very nice work, I prefer the first version myself. There is something a little wrong with the verses, you have some sort of soft wobbly fx thang going on with the vocal, don't really like that, buts works okay with the chorus. I think the end section doesn't really fit with the song either. Well done.

 

Thank you!
I'm guessing the wobbly fx is really a part of the original song (no acapelle version out there yet), which I couldn't get rid of...\

 

I also like both versions, really good work!
For my taste, the melody version build up is a bit more interesting.