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  1. goku223344

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    ok i just got done producing, recording and mixing my song, and before i release it to the public i would like some feedback of how it sounds and or what i need to add or remove
     
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    fixed lol
     
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    I'll have a listen to it now, but you couldn't think of a better name for it?

    I immediately see two things which could be improved. One, the vocals are too quiet and too thin, and two, That clap/snare needs to smack you in the face when you hear it, and it doesn't!

    Otherwise, I think it's good.
     
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    i either going to choose that or superman haha.
    so you think i shuld add more bass to the voice, because i did eq out the bass. and im still working on the snare
     
  7. spyfx

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    hi my friend,good track,try to bring the vocals more upfront and the brassy sound a bit on the background in the mix,that way you have more clarity and focus in your lyrics and what you are saying :wink:
     
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    Ok I fixed everything y'all told me to fix from the vocals to the brass. I even changed the title haha. How does it sound now?
     
  9. spyfx

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    vocals sound clear now :wink:,also try to make the bass a bit more mono if you want ( in the center,that way the repeating melody around it can breath a bit more :wink:)
     
  10. goku223344

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    i knew that bass wasn't mono lol, thanks for pointing that out
     
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