Hi!
I'm new here.

I'm looking for your feedback, and I want to know should I improve this tracks
and If I should -> how.

Thank you!

 

Last edited: Apr 24, 2016

not my thing, sounds like you were using Kontakt with some sound effects library and changing keys now and then. no rhythm , no structure just noise. but again like i said its not my thing, I've heard atmosphere stuff to set a mood im a museum or art installation but without the visuals its kinda boring. production wise its good but there really isn't much to produce in this case.
as an intro to a song if shorter these would have a place. but with that you need to be careful too long an intro few are gonna stick around to get to the meat. Here is an example of it done well. not just one but several entertained and building and making an actual texture then comes the rhythm and the song.

 

I hate being negative when commenting on other people's work, after all we can't all like the same things but...

Track 1 was OK, nice clean production but I think spreading it over 9+ minutes is pushing it too far. The others were just pointless noise.
Sorry.

 

Well... It's just your opinion. I disagree with you.

 

@Pressuer
You seem like a beginner,we all were,nothing bad about it.
Take your time and dig deep,learn the skills,listen to music that inspires you.
Learn the basics of song writing,learn some chords and take it from there.
The problem with your tracks is that they dont develop,music has to be like story telling,a movie,it has to have an intro and then you build around it,it has to be dynamic.
Listen to a lot of movie scores,instrumental music,music has to tell a story has to be interesting to make the listener interested in your music.
Always ask yourself,do i find it interesting,would it make me interested enough to listen to this whole song?
If not,why?
You have to be brutally honest with yourself and i know its hard in the beginning so dont let this discourage you,as we have all been there.
Keep on writing music,with each song you will get better.
Something to get you motivated.

 

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