My New Track - Hard Work pays off.. Don't give up.

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  1. TruBlood

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  3. foster911

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    Your hard work is a vain attempt.

    Don't know why people compare me with you (not even a common point). The intensity of your thoughts is glaringly apparent in your musics without any defensible subtlety.:dont: What do you want to say with your works? Also next time, post your musics to Our Music section not here.
     
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  4. mrpsanter

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    Steve Faoki is back?
     
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    Pretty boring arrangement in my opinion .. it's not really my genre but I know how these type of music needs a good drop to get in the groove.
    But you did a good job with that Title in this thread because it's clickbait as fuck. :like:
     
  6. Yuri

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    Hey Steve, I've missed you so much.
     
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    Your mixing sounds a lot better.

    On the track, Youre not feeling it yet. Dont take me the wrong way but this sounds like when someone who doesnt listen to EDM or goto shows tries to make it. Dissect some more tracks and keep copying the styles until it comes to you naturally.
    Not enough ear candy to keep us interested. The arrangement does get boring and predictable. And your missing all the foley, fills,percs, vox stabs, fx etc. This is not finished yet. And that outro, come on man. You can do way better
     
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    @subGENRE Every piece of music is predictable in one way or another. Music has an inner logic comparable to mathmatics.
    So I think in a couple of years computer code will be able to build music of this grade of quality.

    I wouldn't play it again, as ist is now, but, not really bad :)
     
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    I wonder if people would be this harsh if it wasn't this guy again.

    It's pretty very generic but not otherwise bad. When the drop comes on I hear potential for it to be good, were it made with a little more originality and risk taking.

    That said... now that I'm sure of who we're dealing with.. I'll probably put this handle, too, on my ignore list the next time he says some dumb shit that gets everyone going lol.
     
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  10. foster911

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    These kinds of stupid genres being fed by people knowing nothing about the true musics. Producing more and more of these musics never guarantees that your works brilliantly shine.:dont:
     
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    This is very true, being that my genres of choice are repetitive. I make it a point to make it seem less so though with new synth lines in the reprise and key changes, and other methods. Give them something familiar and something new. Hook writing 101. It can still be cookie cutter arrangement but throw some sprinkles on the cookies the 2nd time you serve em.
     
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  12. TruBlood

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    I agree with everything you guys are saying and subgenre especially. I'm trying ... :wink:
     
  13. foster911

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    Yeah, make an effort for your next nonsensical track. Good luck with your mental paradigm.:wink:
     
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    Lol "true musics". Sounds like something I would have said when I was 16 circlejerking on a rap forum about how [insert mainstream artist] isn't REAL HIP HOP.

    I get that this guy acts like an idiot, but you're simultaneously acting cruel toward some random dude who hasn't done anything wrong except being kind of dumb and bombastic, and making broad stroke generalizations about whole genres, putting people down. Comes off kind of pretentious and narrow minded.
     
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    Oh the irony...
     
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    I never call people like that. I love him more than you think and also care more about his musics that his talent would not be sacrificed by his wrong perceptions of real music world.
    Wow, What? Let's not talk about it at all.
     
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    Lol dude you've got a lot of things to say about other people's music and preferred styles of music for someone with some glaring shortcomings of his own.

    I'll leave it at that because I didn't come here to tear anybody down, but I'll be damned if I let you condescend to me and everyone else
     
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    It doesn't pay off when you have no talent which is quite apparent in that "song" and pretty much every other case on this forum.
     
  19. TruBlood

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    I never said the track was a musical masterpiece, I just said my music productions skills are growing fast such as mixing which is a very complicated and time-consuming process to learn. I expect you to repost your own work under your real name with a comment that nasty.
     
  20. Von_Steyr

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    Please dont insult Mozart.
     
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  21. foster911

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    :hillbilly:
    Music for Foster = Every note or etc must have their vigorous meanings and convey its creator's powerful notion clearly not unwittingly. Generative musics are much better than the OP's track.

    Some people misconstrue aimless mixing as music creation. Suppose how many mindless genres have emerged in this way.
     
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