genesis 1 my first production.

 

seeing as this is your first post here maybe it would be a good idea to possibly comment on some other peoples tracks before you post up your own...

You would probably get a better response dude...

by the way its not bad for a first attemp...certainly better than mine all those years ago :O)

 

It actually made me feel sick listening to this. That much bass and some weird phase shifting going on is not nice for my stomach.

 

down load some of the mixing and mastering tutorials here compression and limiting you will git there

 

thanks all of you for the replys and advice! been working on this for months, still wanted to fine tune subtles but fuigure its ny 2012 so why not, before my computer crashes again and i lose another one to te abyss

 

avante-garde eh?

 

Interesting...
Experimental, you should fuel it with something else.
I think still the whole concept is sitting more in your head than in the track .
I think there is plenty to develop *yes*

 

I'm not sure what your monitors sound like, but on my studio monitors you sound way bass heavy, almost unable to listen. You might want to check it on another system or even a car stereo.

 

ah yes, the car is one of best producers trick in the industry
its like your own private sound proof (mostly) listening booth
*given if you have a nice sound system.

 

ah ya i see how its to bas heavy. i use earbuds and sounds right. until i put pressure on them then ya, need to fix this, i had no idea. thank you all for the feedback! much appreciated.

 

Never, ever use earbuds for more than listening to your iPod.