Mix Critique

Discussion in 'Mixing and Mastering' started by The Mazeman, Dec 30, 2018.

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Do you like it ?

  1. Yes !

    80.0%
  2. No !

    0 vote(s)
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  3. I have some suggestions !

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  1. The Mazeman

    The Mazeman Kapellmeister

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    Any and all comments are welcomed !

     
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  3. No Avenger

    No Avenger Moderator Staff Member

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    First suggestion, multiple votes should be allowed, 'cause I like it and have some suggestions which are:

    1. separate the pan of the solo guit from the the picking guit
    2. bd could use more punch and kick sound
    3. bass could use more growl (~1kHz +/- some 100Hz)
    4. toms need more punch
    5. cyms and co could use less room/reverb
    6. I'd prefer a doubled rhy guit hard panned left and right (would suit the genre)
    7. it's a bit rumbly in the low freq area
    8. I'd hold the last piano note and maybe even shorten the gap afterwards too
    9. lowcut on piano? If yes, use less, there are no other sound which could clash
    10. why didn't you upload a wav?
    11. ah, a bit more lowcut on the hh

    But, it's Metal and I like it, yeah! :metal: Nice massacre part. :yes:
     
  4. Olymoon

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    From Android tablet, I can't listen to it, it says that it's not compatible.
     
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    No Avenger Moderator Staff Member

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    Oh, these non-flashers. [​IMG]
     
  6. The Mazeman

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    Thank You @No Avenger ! I modified the voting and thanks for the suggestions.
     
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    I agree with @No Avenger
    pluse I think you should make a little cut off in 300-350 hz
    but rather then that great track I really like it
    here little mixing and for people who don't have flash
    (it was on private soundCLD )
     
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    Now can you tell me what you think ?
     
  11. Olymoon

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    I finally connect with a computer, and listen to your track, but I must respectfully shut up, as I don't know enough of this genre of music to give an opinion.
     
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