The beat/drums could be introduced in a more creative way. You could tease the beat in with just a simple sound and bring in a more full drum arrangement at 0.53 But I find the drums generally problematic in this track. The drums and the music don't seem to sound well together. I think they need to be simpler for this music and as I said they need to have changes so that they fit with the musical changes. I think if you did this it wouod improve the track's general progress and movement.
I like this. Sounds very nice in my system. Interesting chord changes (1:50). Maybe just a little more of the Drum/percussion tracks, said the drummer. Well done.