Hi Guys. I`ve been a member of this great place for some time..
So today i released my second single and i decided to share it with all of you amazing people for the first time.. As you can see in the title it`s called "Metropolis" and its inspired by the utopic future, kind of a mix of Synthwave/Cyberpunk and Electro elements.. I tried to make it more like a jorney instead of a standard structure. I hope you like it! And feel free to give me any feedback you wish.. Its always welcome! Its early steps but i will release a new music every month if you want to follow my journey! As always thank you because i learn a lot with you guys! And hope you have a great weekend!

Here is a Soundcloud link:

 

I enjoyed this!

 

Thank You!

 

To start off positive: It reminds me of Unsustainable by Muse. There is probably a dozen songs out there that use samples of spoken words to give substance to a song/track.
At the end where the words come back, it sounds like it's building to a climax. But it becomes an anticlimax because nothing happens. Only the pattern returns to repeat itself until the end. Might be something to give another try.
Last vocals are also less clear and therefore harder to understand what is said.

Personally: not my cup of tea 'cause it's lacking that one thing which is a melody.
The production overall sounds clean and crisp on my laptop.
For what it is worth.
Keep them coming
Eddy

 

Hi Eddy! Thank you for your input! Yeah e could explore more that final drop.. Maybe only showing the final pattern after the drop or something.. Or adding more melodic elements to it.. Any of your feedback helps me to future tracks! Cheers Man!

 

Last edited: Mar 5, 2021

You're welcome. They are just a few of my ideas that come up while listening to what you created.
Just post a new version if you made any changes........ ;)