Some new effects I messed with while making this one. This is the second song in this genre so let me know what ya think or what could be better or better tailored thanks alot )

 

It's alright, it's ok, but it needs to be better/stronger, 'alright' doesn't cut it. It's competently done, good structure but there's room for improvement. Good job all the same, you're more than capable so it's in your hands, jus need to step up a gear or two.

Good luck, be bold in your desicions, keep at it und time alone will tell.

 

Hi. I think the composition is ok, but the mix is not there. There is too little sub/bass. The kick is at times too loud and sometimes it gets lost and it does not have a good foundation, it lacks in the lows. In the parts after the break, the synths are too loud compared to the kick/bass. In general make sure the bass is about as loud as your kick as well as the snare/claps. Then balance the other elements accordingly.
Overall the balance is not right. The lower frequencies need more weight in comparison to the highs.

Try and check if your kick and bass are out of phase. It seems like you are loosing a lot of bass when they play together

 

Last edited: Mar 6, 2025 at 12:06 PM

I'm with mino45 here the levels of elements in the mix definitely needs rebalancing.

This is where using reference tracks whilst you're mixing your own track will help - load up a couple of your favourite same genre tracks (ideally the same key as well) and balance your own track against the reference track. That will help you avoid some of the mix issues you have here.