Hello everybody,

I'm composing, mixing and singing/playing a little bit last time, and this is one of my demo songs. I'd be grateful for your listening and comments. The song is not in english so i'm even more interisted in what you think.

Here's the link:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ill7jlIDjCo

Best regards,
Marcin

 

the instrumentals are all a bit verby / hally - im listening through headphones where this sounds really wide and its ok
but maybe its too much for speakers ? cant compare because i dont have any at the moment
but my first intention was, that i wanted put some verb to your voice just to bring it back some meters to the instruments

your voice is not the best so it could be optimized throughh some more effects :PPPP (just hounest)

but the instrumental part of this song is really catchy - all natural and real ->
its melancholic and it DOES bring some sad-mood with it - it reaches me ;)
i think that is what acoustic music basicaly is about - so YOU NAILED IT