Hi there, as i finished a track called "One Last Ride" i've started yesterday, now i'm searching for feedback on this track.. Whats your thoughts about it? What could i've done better? I'm still a "beginner" in the biz so all feedback is appreciated even if your genre isn't really house or progressive it helps me so much to improve my skills, so please do it.

Best regards,
Pontus aka Housephenomena.

http://soundcloud.com/housephenomena/hau5-one-last-ride

 

i like where your going with this, but you know what there is something missing thats making this feel so empty. and thats vocals. if you had some female vocals on there and chopped and stuttered on some of your transitions you would bullseye this baby. IMO!!! very conservative sounding not too wild thats why it needs a sexy voice on it.

 

love it agree with hoodhendrix vocals would complete this !

 

Thx guys, if you listen to the song i've made like 20 days ago i feel it going forward so much, i'm still new into this.. Been producing for 3 months. I gotta learn more about vocal editing and stuff, thx so much for the comments.

 

nice, but it needs a vocal