http://soundcloud.com/cave7/current-project
http://soundcloud.com/cave7/u-13

All feedback is much appreciated! Thank you for your time and feel free to leave questions or pm me.

 

I prefer the second one to the first.
But kinda of short, I mean when I was like getting into the thing I've realized that the obsessive groove and the percussive gestures have vanished!
How is that?
Seriously I think it is a good start (draft)

 

Nice to see more tracks being uploaded on here, kudos. On your first track its sounds like either your have a really short release time on your sampler or you have just cut your samples really short.
As a result it sounds a bit choppy, too tight almost. I think if you increased the release or decreased the fade (the 'tail' bit of your sample) it would glue everything together a bit more and give you more of a head nod vibe. Maybe a little bit of verb or delay on a send. Peas

 

there cool the first one sounds like a kanye west beat and the secant one sounds like a naz

 

I like second one, interesting. First is fucked up :D Breaks are to often so you even dont know what author has in his head while he were mixing this It's joke ofc

 

Thanks everyone for the helpful feedback!

 

I like the second one !

But like "futureb" said it sounds a really choppy. Try to clean it up a bit

cheers