Looking for feedback on a new track.

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by [email protected], Jul 16, 2018.

  1. T3NR@

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    I don't really know what genre to put this in, it started as an ambient track but then I added some really hard hitting drums and other stuff. Turn up the volume and enjoy. @[email protected]
     
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  3. mercurysoto

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    I really like it. I gave it a listen while doing household stuff and nothing poked out as wrong. Congratulations.
     
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    Really nice journey. Fine work!
     
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    Its real good let someone else name the genre haha
     
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  6. flush with your foot

    flush with your foot Ultrasonic

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    love! love slow progression and noisy / broken sounds!
     
  7. Recoil

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    I like this not-quite-clean sound, is it Hunter S. Thompson on your avatar?
     
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    Looks like Hunter! @Recoil Good eye.
     
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    Nice!
    Maybe some less hard drums would fit better? Like a simple Visco kit.
    Or some other cheap sounding drumcomputer. Rim instead of snare? Or using some otherworld sounding kit?
    I don't really know this type of music, ambient/ electronic. So you may want to ignore my comment :wink:

    Keep it up.
     
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    Nice. May I ask which synths were used?
     
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    Good, I like it. Nice journey, not too short. :winker:

    Bass and bd are a bit overpowering.
     
  12. T3NR@

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    Thank you ^^ Yes it is, my kind of crazy that guy.
     
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    Thanks. Sure - Toxic Biohazard, Harmor, 3xOsc, Vanguard and Nexus.
     
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    Thank you for your thoughts.
     
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    I'm glad you like it. ^^
     
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    Glad you liked it.
     
  17. T3NR@

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    Ha that's good to hear on the one hand and bad on the other as in I don't know where to go next in terms of improvement. But I'm glad that you like it.
     
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    U're very vintage!! :D
     
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    Very nice!
    For my taste the snare is not right. It's too high pitched and clear. I would expect it to be darker, maybe...
     
  20. T3NR@

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    Trying not to rely on too much unnecessary junk is all. :winker:
     
  21. T3NR@

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    Thank you for your thoughts. It was unexplored territory so I just went with it.
     
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