so not sure what i was thinking when i made this song. at the start when i made it i like it. now not so much lol

so let me know what you think and how i can improve on things

cheers

http://soundcloud.com/randomtazk/random-tazk-sushi-original-mix

 

Damn, I don't remember where these chords are from. Sounds like Chicane but with a Carte Blanche feel. Damn, now I can't stop pondering. Thanks.
The mixture between psytrance and trance classic doesn't work for me. Really sounds like 1999.
Also, try a low-cut. The lower frequencies are really clogged up.

 

The acidlines aren't well synced with the beat, it makes the listener's ear bit confused, same thing goes with the chords. For the bass you should have gone with the continuous one, lower volume with a nice subbass, but otherwise you did a great job goodluck next time, I'm sure you'll do better.