LightOfSirius - Outerspace EDM Project

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by LightOfSirius, Dec 26, 2018.

  1. LightOfSirius

    LightOfSirius Noisemaker

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    Hey,
    this is my new song Outerspace.
    I am very thankful for every feedback.
    Thanks in advance!

     
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  3. jointsmoker

    jointsmoker Noisemaker

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    the drums need to come more forward
    the leads/synths needs more eq reverb
    nice bass line
    i like the track idea just need more mixing
    good job man :)
     
  4. LightOfSirius

    LightOfSirius Noisemaker

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    thanks for the feedback jointsmoker, i will work on that.
    Btw this song was created while smoking some Js after a one year pause.
    It can be very inspiring :D
     
  5. No Avenger

    No Avenger Audiosexual

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    I would change the first lead synth (and add a delay), didn't convince me.
    The second lead synth is a bit too loud.
    The 'Yeah' is a bit out of place, means I would skip it.
    Other than that I agree with jointsmoker.
     
  6. Kinghtsurfer

    Kinghtsurfer Audiosexual

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    Sounds good... Agree with all points made by @jointsmoker and @No Avenger ...

    Only suggestion I would make is to add more musical movement to the song... Bits and pieces entering and exiting to heighten excitement...

    Good work :like:
     
  7. LightOfSirius

    LightOfSirius Noisemaker

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    Thank you for the feedback and sorry for the late reply. At the moment I almost got no time to finish this track but sure I will do. When it is finished and I'm happy with it I will post it here again :)
     
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