Here we are. My own stuff: no remix, again.

MeItsNotMe – Hiding
http://soundcloud.com/thantrax/meitsnotme-hiding

MeItsNotMe - Staring at the sea (in her eyes)
http://soundcloud.com/thantrax/meitsnotme-staring-at-the-sea

 

Nice work buddy, but on the first track i'd tame the sibilance a bit more. It's not exaggerated but when you compare for example the vocal's ss, tss with the hihat, you'll notice the hihat sounds like a baby against to that vocal. Or you can automate the bypass of some transient shaper effect to bring up the presence of the hihat only when the vocal kicks in. Also the kicks would need more beef.
Maybe that's only my taste... because if you wanted your track to sound like that, then it's a matter of taste and i stated mine regarding your track.

I'm gonna let other users to judge the second track Goodluck!

 

Thanks Evorax. I appreciate your remarks about the hissing. I left them as they were because I wanted to keep the atmosphere that is created when a band playing in a garage, into a room acoustically bad. However, I began to understand the fundamental rule of mixing: every mixing session is different. I think it's a good start.