is this production good?

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  1. ExBen

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    Hi guys, i produced a track. I would like to hear your feedbacks :)
     
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  3. BEAT16

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    Hello @ExBen, great work and super that you have intrigued other classical instruments. Exemplary song structure.
    At some point you could still pack the human singing purely to give the song more humanity.
     
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    Low end is all over the place. Try to control it with a dynamic EQ or a similar tool.
     
  5. ExBen

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    thanks for feedbacks! \m/ i think bass is not all over the place. mid's are low. song needs another leads at this song like vocal phrases.
     
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    I listened with fresh ears. I was fatigued when i wrote that. You are right.
    The low end is alright.
    Well mixed.
     
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    Your subs are indeed quite rumbly, but it fits the track I'd say. Anyways, try to check that in a car and/or in a club if you can, that would make sure if it's excessive or not.
     
  8. Crinklebumps

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    Production is good. Maybe as an experiment consider cutting the length by a minute or two - I used to work with a singer who believed in getting right to the point at the beginning of a song, reducing the 16 bar or so intro I had to just one bar and I had to admit after doing that it sounded much better. You have some long sections with not much happening - try a 3 minute edit, the result might surprise you.
     
  9. BlackHaze1986

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    Sounds Very Nice To My Ears :wink: Well Done :mates:
     
  10. justwannadownload

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    This piece is already two minutes shorter than the average for this kind of music. It's not meant to be a pop song.
     
  11. MrLyannMusic

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    i'd love to get my hand on the wav file, if you can please do.
     
  12. baszermaszer

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    Good job! Needs to be shorter. Liked the first minute, then from ~2:00. I would buy it for my sci-fi game, but would request a shortening and cutting out some stretches, like repeating stuff around 4:00. Remain on scene longer and we might buy from you.
     
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    sounds great to me. nice job.
     
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