1. More Weight with not enough separation
2. More interesting variation in the rhythm. Create a groove (even with 4 on the floor the rhythmic aspects should stand by themselves)
3. Needs more separation in each sound in the frequency spectrum. (maybe introduce a sound and take one out or vary that vocal sample with processing)
4. Builds and drops the most important emotional expression in Tech-house, gabba, trance, psy

Good ideas though. Keep at it

 

They do here.
I think we are all seeing something different in the question "Is this production good?"
And I think it's the word production that is throwing some of us.
Why people are suggesting actual instrumentation changes and structure changes is beyond me!

 

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Because the instrumentation is a crucial part of the final product (= production). You seem to have a narrow understanding of the term?

 

Almost bleed from my ears...
But keep on, only practice takes you to higher levels.

 

So do you.
This is a finished production.

 

Did the OP actually want to know what we think about this?
He seems to have posted and then buggered off.

 

Last seen Monday.
May imply read.
Would now be nice to know what kind of feedback he wanted.
I doubt it was to rearrange the track totally! lol
Going back to the start and creating a different track, by the sounds of most here!

 

Hey guys, i read all of your comments of course. Thanks your advices. All of ideas important for me.
When i finished this track, my thought was like it is just a demo. I will produce again.
When i listen this track again and again, I detect some issues with you.
Firstly, I agree with you. I should make rolls. And before 2.24, a noisy sound which is grooving 1/8 and panning around. I will delete it or make it groovy. Another problem, all elements changing after bass drop. I need one or two more elements which is playing at the starting with the kick drum for play again for the sake of completeness for track.

After that, i need more bass at mixing. Needs more punch effect to my face. How i will get it? It's simple. I am willing to create a lead synth which is low mid and mid and very punchy and dry also. If i finish it I will post it again. Or i will produce another one.
Thanks.