is this production good?

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  1. Dimentagon

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    1. More Weight with not enough separation
    2. More interesting variation in the rhythm. Create a groove (even with 4 on the floor the rhythmic aspects should stand by themselves)
    3. Needs more separation in each sound in the frequency spectrum. (maybe introduce a sound and take one out or vary that vocal sample with processing)
    4. Builds and drops the most important emotional expression in Tech-house, gabba, trance, psy
    Good ideas though. Keep at it :wink:
     
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  2. Smoove Grooves

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    They do here.
    I think we are all seeing something different in the question "Is this production good?"
    And I think it's the word production that is throwing some of us.
    Why people are suggesting actual instrumentation changes and structure changes is beyond me!
     
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    Because the instrumentation is a crucial part of the final product (= production). You seem to have a narrow understanding of the term?
     
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    Almost bleed from my ears...
    But keep on, only practice takes you to higher levels.
     
  6. Smoove Grooves

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    So do you.
    This is a finished production.
     
  7. Stuck In The 80s

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    Did the OP actually want to know what we think about this?
    He seems to have posted and then buggered off.
     
  8. Smoove Grooves

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    Last seen Monday.
    May imply read.
    Would now be nice to know what kind of feedback he wanted.
    I doubt it was to rearrange the track totally! lol
    Going back to the start and creating a different track, by the sounds of most here!
     
  9. ExBen

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    Hey guys, i read all of your comments of course. Thanks your advices. All of ideas important for me.
    When i finished this track, my thought was like it is just a demo. I will produce again.
    When i listen this track again and again, I detect some issues with you.
    Firstly, I agree with you. I should make rolls. And before 2.24, a noisy sound which is grooving 1/8 and panning around. I will delete it or make it groovy. Another problem, all elements changing after bass drop. I need one or two more elements which is playing at the starting with the kick drum for play again for the sake of completeness for track.

    After that, i need more bass at mixing. Needs more punch effect to my face. How i will get it? It's simple. I am willing to create a lead synth which is low mid and mid and very punchy and dry also. If i finish it I will post it again. Or i will produce another one.
    Thanks.
     
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