The male voice needs a little more attention. It sounds a little muffled and a little muddy.
Very nice piece of music !

 

Not too bad at all. I agree the vocal needs some work, right now it sounds a bit drowned in the instrumental part.

 

thank you. Very kind of you.You're right about the voice. To much low mid? and maybe to much verb?

 

It's very difficult to mix my own music. I'm more comfortable with other artists.

 

Good enough. The male vocals are too wet tho (too much delay and reverb) and also performed less confidently than everything else. I suggest improving performance first and foremost. You clearly know how to mix, so the mix quality will come natural after that.

Too much throaty 3k-ish, in fact. Dampen this sound, bring up everything else a bit and dial back reverbs and delays, should be fine.
Also maybe make a bit more space for vocals around 350 kHz in other instruments. Like 1 dB.

 

Not Bad production wise! but sounds no low end here abit to tinny! /Muddy!

 

did you use ample guitar for the acoustic? it souds super good, as the comment above the voice sounds nasal and a little high in volume. The rest is super great

 

I used NI strummed guitar.
Thank you all for your advice. I'll get to work.

 

Personaly i would just gain un tous petit peu the upper mids of the male voice and decrease the volume of the whole male voice.
but all in all a very good work