In need of Opinions , artistic viewpoints and constructive criticism..

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by Mat O, Feb 28, 2019.

  1. Mat O

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    One of the two tracks that i have done lately .. probably my last.All of your opinions on my work has been encouraging and helpful . Thank you all.
     
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  3. Recoil

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    Nice chillout music :guru:
     
  4. The Pirate

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    Very nice, I would just cut down on the FXs. It is way too much.
     
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    Cool progression. The reverb might be a bit too washy but liking the chill factor. Why is it your last?
     
  6. korte1975

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    cool. try to come out of the 1-note structure!
     
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    Sounds good man... agree with the rest about there being too much 'verb...
     
  8. Pronto

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    how about letting those synths breathe a little..don't bring in the drum beat until about a minute in to create some extra "narrative" in the music?
     
  9. Mat O

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    Thank you man
     
  10. Mat O

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    Will cut down of the reverb. Thank you for pointing it out.
     
  11. Mat O

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    I am tired of producing.I am at the verge of quiting. If i dont find anything inspirational to listen to i might just quit making music.
     
  12. Mat O

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    I have kept the one note bassline and drone structure to enhance the meditative feel.Thank you for pointing it out.
     
  13. Mat O

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    Pronto you are 100 percent right. Thank you for taking the time and caring to comment.
     
  14. The Pirate

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    Inspiration doesn't necessarily needs to come from music itself. It can come from within yourself, from reading a book, collaborating with others. You are talented. Just don't give up just because you cant get inspired, take a little break and refocus. Dont let your talent go to waste.
     
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    nice chill dude, never give up, take a break for a few months, then you will find more inspiration, i did just that, i think that sometimes we expect too much from our productions, easy to say thats it, but believe me when i say a holiday from music is the best path here, i was gonna give up and sell my studio, which cost me 7k 10 years ago, keep at it
     
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    Very nice production and sort of asian vibe. I especially liked your unique "let the glow of the reverb build up into a massive drone" techniques. Sounds like a massive space, humming just under the music.

    If you're not releasing on any labels, you could be - might want to shop around with your track. I would add some ambient samples of japanese kids doing schoolyard chants or something (while drowning in reverb) and the track's ready for tons of girls to love it in their earphones.

    Your style reminds me of Vladislav Delay a little, if you've never heard of him, have a listen.
     
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    Would be right at home in a Tarantino movie... quite nice, hardly any poo at all.:headbang:
     
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    boring, you have nothing to say, I will never listen a second time
     
  19. Mat O

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    please elaborate
     
  20. Mat O

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    Thank you Satai, much appreciated.
     
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    Thank you.
     
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