It's funny. Funny to read some comment goin' like : "I'm not goin' to listen to your track because it's too loud". Switching the "please advice" to a "loudness war" troll. (if you hate edm and loud music that much : just click next topic, but don't expect club-ish music to be mastered and mixed like jazz, it's not the same game)

The kick should have more presence, and arrive in front it feels it's at the back of the room (except in the drop).
The strings sound really too loud and has a cheesy feel.
The snare lacks impact.
I thinks there's a too many notes syndrom. Go more simple. Melody talk to head, drums talk to heart : they don't work so well if you put a complex melody and a loud beat at the same time.