I would back the reverb off a li'l bit except for the hats; I would add it there. Otherwise, I like it! I saw someone above said the bass might be too heavy, but for my taste, it's just right.

 

For my own taste the vocal is hard to hear, which goes along with some of what the others have said. Lots of verb and maybe not enough presence. For ME the vocal should be the main focus. Maybe a little more clear, and on top. Maybe too much verb for same reason. You are welcome to put this in my mix workshop if you like.

 

May I ask what your workshop is about? How does it work?

Thanks

 

Not giving points - I like the song.
Needs a lot more work.
I like the bass. The drums are really weak. Compared to the bass.
To be honest the bass is in the ballpark if you turn down the reverb on some parts (end for example). The rest needs a lot more work.

 

Oh I can edit but not delete one of my posts. Forgot how to use the quotes.

 

Sorry, I am learning how to use the quotes. Here is one song in the workshop. You will notice multiple players on the page, which members insert their mixes into so that we can compare the mixes immediately, and then discuss the differences at the bottom. I have many songs in my own catalog I will be re-mastering, and comparing different mixes using this tool. All are welcome. I just posted the stems for "An Afternoon In April" on there. You will notice that in the navigation panel top right: https://sites.google.com/site/comparemixmaster/ya-dig-suzy

 

Nice initiative thanks...

 

Sorry it's not possible for now.

 

Same as most feedback here. Too much reverb on certain instruments, bass a tad bit loud etc. I love dreampop/shoegaze. Need some time to sit down and work on a few tracks!

 

No worries, we have plenty keeping us busy.