Hybrid Jungle track! feedback appreciated!

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  1. SPTA

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    Hello there!!

    I'm new here! Been in music prod. a lil while and i want to share one of my works.

    Mix is raw but i still working on it!

    THX!



     
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  3. No Avenger

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    Hi SPTA (how is that supposed to be pronounced?),

    welcome to THE FORUM [​IMG], interesting track, I never heard something like this before.

    If I may draw your attention to a small flaw, the track is mono.
     
  4. SPTA

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    Its pronounce SPATA without A...something like this:disco:
    Yep, I know,I follow Dr Dre's advice to mix everything in mono but I overdid it a little...:crazy:

    THX for feedback!:wink:
     
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  5. Tod Slaughter

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    Mix in mono and switch back to stereo when done :D
     
  6. SPTA

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    THX !

    completely forgot about it:beg:
     
  7. Edi

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    What's up SPATA.
    Interesting tune....I'm just wondering about d snare / beat....did u lower its level on purpose?
    btw, I bet it sounds fuller & clearer in stereo
    I personally always give d most ''meat'' to my beat --> higher level volume wise.
    I'm interested in hearing d ''final'' mix (we all know it's never final final, but hey, it is what it is :yes:)...let us know when u finish :winker:
    Enjoy d process :guru:
     
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  8. pine

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    Welcome, SPTA.

    First things first, awesome tune! Since you're asking for feedback here it goes:

    I know you're going for the meaty jungle vibes and there's nothing wrong with that (trust me, I'm a big fan of those lol) but I think this track in particular would benefit if you kept the sort of broken, abstract, almost 'steppy', minimal dnb vibe with hints of jungle breaks (just like that little edit you have towards the end of the intro). The meaty part of the track seems out of context and lacking a proper flow between breaks, you know what I mean?

    Other than that, I really like it! Especially the intro (0:00 to 1:31), it's proper stuff and got me excited for the rest of the track.

    That's all regarding creative aspects. As for the technical aspects, not really worth mentioning, since you're still working on the mixdown. Just one thing that's already been pointed out, mix in mono and make sure it's stereo before you export the 'trackXYZ_final_final_v14final.wav' :bleh:.

    P.S. Not saying this is THE WAY, it's just what I would do. Some people mistake honest feedback with personal attack because they get overly attached to their tracks. I don't know you or how you'll react so I'm kinda risking it here but I'm sure you'll let me know what you think :).
     
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  9. Spyfxmk2

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    :like: :yes: :drummer:
     
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    This track is brilliant... Very intricate... Great drum programming... Really enjoyed it.. great work!

    :like::like::like:
     
  11. Recoil

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    Nice track but it sounds like it would be in mono :yes::like:
     
  12. SPTA

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    Already made some small adjustments and got rid of this mono\stereo problem :facepalm:

    Yes i know what you mean:bow:

    THX for your honest feedback!:cheers::thanks:
     
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    hey my nicca. I like what you have going on its tight.
    its one the best mono mixes i heard . haha
     
  14. SPTA

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    I Re-upload my track with some small changes and i think i'm done with it.

    I did this track in just 3 days. I think this is a good start.

    THX for all feedback!:cheers:
     
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    wrong.
     
  16. No Avenger

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    Ah, stereo now, sounds way better.

    P.S.@korte1975 see post #3, #4, #5 :winker:
     
  17. sparkles

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    Love it, the sound design is reeeaaaally good! I m on the way to give this kind of sound to my dnb tracks (not the same but quite similar,lol)yeahhh! big ups !
     
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    hey
    sounds ok to me
    could you tell us a bit more about how the track was done ? samples ? synths or VSTs, DAW, etc .. ? ( it's optional, but I always ask when a track sounds interesting. there's no magic sauce, but I think one of the main interest of forums is to exchange and compare ways of working and material we use )

    :mates:
     
  19. sparkles

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    I left this thread, with a wonder and a desire to know... "how did he got it?" and then @black bounty did the answer nicely explained.
    Yes it will be lovely if you could tell us the way and how you end up with this track :yes: :thumbsup:
     
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    SPTA, can I get this track in mp3/320 kbps?
    I like it and want it in my current everyday playlist! :like:
     
  21. SPTA

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    Hello friends ! What kind of sounds (in the track) you interesting in ? I use Ableton 10 and some fabfilter plugins,massive,serum,kontakt and izotope stuff etc...nothing special:bow: and of course classic amen stuff, just improvise with arrangement.

    It's just a matter of taste:cheers:

    And i have a question. Where do i get an original break loop from Dkay - the Martians ?
    I've heard that break a lot in oldschool DnB.
     
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