Hello

I'm trying to copy 'Daft Punk - One more time' intro section.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jtQC8ChpUeg

And this is my result.
http://soundcloud.com/johnyjohn7/omtintro
I know this is quite far from the original one.

I made this with logic pro's plugins ( eq, pitch shift, bitcrusher etc.. )

what is my sound's problem and how can I fix it?

 

You should post a regular Soundcloud link. Remember to remove the s in https to make use of YouTube embedding

 

Try highpass filter on the Eddie Johns "More Spell On You" samples. Maybe some stereo widening (to lower the drums, etc in M, as in the mid).
You don't need bitcrushing.