So this is my most recently mixed trrack,
Can you guys give some advice on it?
I was trying to go for some harsh sounding dark track

http://soundcloud.com/rflip/horror-story

What do you guys think?

 

Very, very dark sound
3:01 onwards you stayed flirty with board
not that style of music is, but it's very dark and shiny with scratchy lead simultaneously.
I think he needed to fill in your track as pads and effects (not many).
But I was very good, sounds good.
To go on and esperimenta and practice, my cute boy

Sorry for my English and my possible spelling mistakes

 

I don't know if I should thank you for that comment ahaha
Anyone as some more feedback on my track

 

Anyone else as something to say?