Hello folks. Been a long time since I posted here. I heard a few orchestral pieces here and thought I'd share.

 

Nice track. One thing I did notice. At around 1:40 the timing of the bells is momentarily off and not in a good way. Likewise, around 1:49 several instruments start drifting and by 1:54 it is bad.
(I have been listening to music all day...so it could be my ears playing a trick on me). Thanks for sharing your music.

 

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Thanks Tony. You're right about that sloppy stretch. I couldn't find a suitable drum loop for that section and wound up piecing it together rather haphazardly.

 

You've got some great ideas here... The composition is also quite layered and a lot of elements come and go...

Whats needed is a better, more coherent production and arrangement. As it stands right now, the instruments used sound like GM to my ears (I could be wrong) and the arrangement is a little too loose... needs more work in that department.

All in all... good work! Please share more!

 

Exactly what I thought: You might want to use some sample libraries instead and add some effects to your production.

Anyway, a very nice track, bring them on!

 

Thanks guys. I do tend to get lazy with tightness and arrangment. I'm using the Edirol Orchestral. A little long in the tooth.

 

You know how to compose, you could add some effects to instruments such as Reverb, but it is also good too