http://adf.ly/OQxSI song is ready to be heard I take opinions, negative and positive. if you would like to collab message me here or at soundcloud

 

First impression: Dont use adf.ly when you want to get feedback, makes a bad impression (in my opinion)

Anyway I clicked, and here's what I think:
The Track has potencial, I think it could really rock.

I would make the 808s louder and let them kick in more, maybe layer with a high kick.

I would use a clap during the main part, missed it.

The siren is a bit to loud, and I think it would be cooler if you let the siren stay longer.

You start with one melody, and when the beats start the melody its a bit simpler. Thats cool, but I would change back to the old melody at about 0:30, otherwise it could get a bit boring.

Just an idea, maybe it's because I listened to much MUST DIE! lately, but I would pitch the synth a bit (via Modulation Envelope, I guess your synth have that, too), and add a bit more reverb. I think that would givethe whole track more party-feeling.

The preview is short, and I dont know what you plan to do with the track. Maybe add a section with a different synth, trance-like or something, together with a pad? Just ideas.

Anyway, what do you expect from a collab? Just someone who will finish the track with you, or do you want someone with a certain style do add this style?

 

Yeah you can't go wrong with 808's! i just added the extra claps which helped the track the only problem I might have is giving the synths reverb, DUBTURBO doesn't have big features built inside like my logic pro and studio one so in that case i might just send wav files to whoever wanna collab and they can spice it up from there p.s that MUST-DIE guy pretty dope I listen to people like DJSLINK mostly trap but all-party music is cool whatever keeps the club pumped..