my music. is electronic music

https://el3tro.bandcamp.com/

 

Man, even though I find some of your ideas interesting, at least 50% of the sounds desperately need an overhaul. Way to dry, aggressive, upfront and heavy on the ears.
Two examples: the synth in Intro needs a way slower attack phase and that synth in El3tro starting at 00:36 is a no-go this way. I immediately turned down the volume.

 

same as above. tame those synth, they are too upfront.
nice tune and good luck

 

Thanks for the tip

 

Hi and welcome!

The concepts are definitely there but I agree that your expression could be arranged more structurally and can use a little more variation in regards to melody and instruments. The levels in the mix will help. Keep it up.