hi im new here and a like to share my music

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by yumig, May 26, 2021.

  1. yumig

    yumig Newbie

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    Man, even though I find some of your ideas interesting, at least 50% of the sounds desperately need an overhaul. Way to dry, aggressive, upfront and heavy on the ears.
    Two examples: the synth in Intro needs a way slower attack phase and that synth in El3tro starting at 00:36 is a no-go this way. I immediately turned down the volume.
     
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    same as above. tame those synth, they are too upfront.
    nice tune and good luck
     
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    Thanks for the tip
     
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    Kadii Noisemaker

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    Hi and welcome!

    The concepts are definitely there but I agree that your expression could be arranged more structurally and can use a little more variation in regards to melody and instruments. The levels in the mix will help. Keep it up.
     
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