BAPTIZED IN BLUE

it's a marvelous day
baptized in blue
i can only tell the truth
i'm capsized by you
i believe i have recreated my youth
remember, my sister, my life wasn't a waste
baptized in blue
i can only tell the truth
i believe i have recreated my youth
feels like i'm always being hugged
this blanket isn't heroin its definitely love

 

I dont understaND what you mean

 

so you see , you never learned to use notes .

 

To me it is more punk rock than grunge
Keep on

 

why you post song from 2013 ?

 

I like that last part.

 

Definitely matches the style and aesthetics of Nirvana's Bleach very closely!

 

No yelling and roaring...

 

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F(tr)O(ll)STER? is it you, again?

 

You used the wrong notes.

 

No soul,
Wrong notes,
Do not pass go

 

What do you expect from a music made in 5 minutes with available instruments on my phone? It was just to show that music doesn't need to use violence. If you want better things, you have to wait because I'm still learning. Professional orchestration takes time and requires a lot of information.

 

on top some steve dude with huge reputation pointed out the track is from 2013....

 

I am not ULX. im a dude who doesn't troll and just posts music he's written. I only found out about this site a week ago. Im sorry if im spamming or causing issues. I dont know what the exact rules are for the site. I was just excited to share my music

 

Nope, I'm Brent, my own person.

 

sick tune man, you're going places

 

Because I've never shared it with a bunch of strangers, so its nice to see what outside opinions with no biases have to say

 

This doesn't have violence. It's actually about repentance

 

I did not expect much from you.

I did not mean to express violence in the words used. I meant the way the words were said.
Everyone's artistic path is related to him, but even if you make 1000 songs like this, it will not have a special effect on the listener. Only the rhythm of your words changes or when the distorted sound of guitar and drums enters.
Ask your listeners and see if they even remember any of your songs. I do not intend to insult or make fun of this style of music, because every style is created for a reason, but remember that shouting and making strange noises is not worthy of a 21st century person. Instead of these things, try not to neglect the correct expression of words and the deep impact of your future songs on listeners.

 

Im just happy to have someone to talk to. This also is not the only style of music i make. That's a dangerous assumption you made. Also, I am happy if everybody likes it, nobody likes it, some like it, some hate it...i dont much think about people's recall of my music. Its literally what keeps me having faith in life, making music that is. So, i appreciate the tedious, forgettable critiques youve given me, but you're barking up the wrong gum tree.