Goodbye - by MrPsanter

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  1. mrpsanter

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    I'm not planning to leave but I thought it would be fitting to post this track that I finished about a week ago.

    I still believe that in the end, this forum is (still) about music and this is the reason why I'm keeping on posting some stuff from time to time, asking for the feedback of my fellow members.

     
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  3. Talmi

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    Man seriously you scared me with that title !

    Thanks for sharing, I dig :wink:....The lead starting at 0.41 something is a bit too upfront...Nice track.
     
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  4. mrpsanter

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    @Talmi
    LOL , thanks my friend!
     
  5. GodHimSelf

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    Nice work :) I like the randomy drums mangled with the bass.
     
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    MrPsanter, I like this track ...One thing ...It sounds really happy ...Sounds like a "Hello" instead of "Goodbye" song lol :yes:
     
  7. Talmi

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    Thought the same thing...

    Also @mrpsanter nice "hommage" to @Judge Dredd with the whole vocoder thing.:)
     
  8. mrpsanter

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    This was not intentional but thanks!
     
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    Sounds like a low cost 8 bit porn video game soundtrack.
     
  10. EddieXx

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    love the "main theme", but there are some random notes and "almost right" chord changes.

    you could easily fix it (this or next time you make a new song)

    when finished with all the tracks play/pause and sing each melody/baseline etc while listening to the song and you will directly know when a tone unexpectedly went a bit to high or to low, you will have sung one way and the track will have gone somewhere else. so you fix the as you sing along.

    dont know if its something that could work for everyone but for me it used to help a lot. cheers


    ps: and thanks for the great laugh with the title! :rofl:
     
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    TBH I was unaware that there were some porn video games in the 80s... :rofl:
     
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    @mrpsanter sounds happy,like the drums & thanks for sharing :keys: :bow:
     
  13. G String

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    "porn" is a bit of stretch. The cassette case inlay was the raunchiest thing about them, so rumour has it, at least.

    Actually, it does remind me of the music for the level boss in "Strip Poker 2: Thai Edition"
     
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    try to fix the timing at 0.16, it starts out of rhythm after the intro.
     
  15. SteveFaoki'sGhostProducer

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    Sounds you put a HP filter on half this mix lmao
     
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    where's LOW END
     
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    Oooh... So retro so enjoy! Love it @mrpsanter ... Only thought the vocoded voice had a few off keynotes... Love the way youve played with the drums and other elements... Great work...:like:
     
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    If the
    Pet shop boys had made 20 version of 'you are always on my mind' until the final version,

    This could well be the V0.3
     
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    You say that like it's a negative thing! XD
     
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    Talmi is on point with the 0:41 being a bit too loud, but the two main thing that stuck out to me were: 1) The off-notes, which were few, but stuck out, and, 2) The instrument that comes in at 0:56. It makes things a bit to messy. Maybe drop something out in the background to make some room for it, because it does sound pretty cool and warrants prominence. ("Pretty cool" is pretty advanced Audio Terminology, but I think you know what I mean. :rofl:)
    Overall, after listening to it a few times, I like the track. The comment on the low-end is technically correct, but on the flip side of that, I have tracks that have very little low-end (yes, odd for Soul/Hip Hop/whatever-the-Hell-I-make, but it does happen,) because it fits the song; it really isn't always necessary unless you are someone who feels the need to follow the "rules" on how to make a track to a "T." If you had just skimped on the low-end or didn't bring it forward enough, that'd be one thing, but it sounds like you intentionally made it very mid-heavy. Either way, I like the balance as it is. I don't always need 20HZ kicking me in the face.
    Despite not being "my" type of music, I do listen to everything, and if I heard this song, I'd definitely check out the album. Nice work. :yes:
     
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