God Sent - DJ4LON3 (released now) (100 free codes added)

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  1. indianwebking

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  3. Smoove Grooves

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    Sounding clean & nice!
    Well done to you, and to @No Avenger. :wink:

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    Did No Avenger do his magic again on a 2-track mixdown, or did you give him the stems?
     
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  4. indianwebking

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    no stems. only wav and his magic :)
     
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  5. indianwebking

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    reedem your free codes here. [100 free coded added] :)

    http://djalone.bandcamp.com/yum



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  6. Recoil

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    Nice one :hifive: very well mixed :yes:
     
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  7. The Pirate

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    Nicely done vro! I am digging it. :headbang: Thanks for sharing it with all of us. With that said, I have a suggestion and a question.

    Suggestion: structurally the track needs some changes, mainly when it comes to the intro. As it is, the intro is way too long, more so for a song that is only 2:45. Indeed, even if the song were longer you can't overlook the attention span of listeners of this genre. By 0:33 (16 bars) you have teased the listener enough to bring power into the song. However, you did not. Finally, don't forget the club DJ. An EDM needs the club DJ in order to become a hit. Therefore, such track must have an intro that appeals to the DJs by making it easier for them to mix it in, and keeping the energy flowing. On this aspect, your song fails the test.

    Question: Did @No Avenger introduced the Air Compressor in your master bus? He is known worldwide for using this technique.:hillbilly:

    Edit: Examples of the Air Compressor in master bus technique has been discussed in previous threads so there is no need to elaborate on it.
     
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  8. Ankit

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    Well done. :disco:
    Download your fav song, put it in your DAW and observe the song structure and then try to make something similar to that. Practice 1 song a day and you will see huge improvement. No need to go into sound design and stuff. Focus on structure of song and music theory first.
     
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  9. indianwebking

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    noted big bro love the feedback. i don't know what he did but he did the magic. he came up with lots of versions and then i had to choose one. and i then selected what he suggested. and also he did master the previous song of mine named "alone wolf". _/\_

    thanks and love you my bro. thanks for taking the time. yeah i lately been learning lot of song structure and also the reference game is a bit up for me. thanks for mentioning it Ankit :) respect to you also ^_^

    and sorry i forgot you @r4e but now you're invited also. please come :)
     
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  10. Gyro Gearloose

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    stay on that genre.sounds great.do what ankit says...:cheers::grooves:
     
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  11. No Avenger

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    Thanks a lot for the very nice words, but to be honest, there wasn't much magic necessary. Mainly some experience in terms of levels and frequencies. The basic mix was already good. :wink:
     
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    This shit's fuck'n dope!!
     
  15. A Ghost On The Moon

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    That "Beep Beep Beep" @0:57 Sounds just like the "Pokemon low on HP" sound. Dope Track all in all, will be throwing it in my party playlist. As for criticism I will keep it constructive, The drop section seems to be very repetitive when it comes to drums and backing. If you would like to alter this (as I think the repetitive dance beat is the POINT of this song) you could always add a breakdown that would give a respite from the dancey beat. Almost as if the ending of the track should show up somewhere halfway through the dropped beat then after a few bars of the staccato bass and arp you could go back into the drop beat but with some variation that brings up the energy even more. This is all I would even think of adding besides some vocals (again pretty sure the point is there is no vocals) so I would say its a solid 8/10, inspired me to work on more EDM type stuff.
     
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    duly noted boss.
     
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