The upload to bandcamp for the audiophiles has to wait until tomorrow..it's been stuck at 2% for 15 minutes now...

Until then: the YouTube version coincidentally including a video

Sorry to @Beth and Co., I'll write you tomorrow too..

 

Another great track ! Very cool video too and off course good to see my favorite bass player ;) Look forward to hearing part II !

 

I really liked this song, a lot!

 

Very nice.

You've hit on one you can polish to springboard standard. The bones and thematic lyrical construction are superb, am not a metal fan and I can appreciate how good this particular track could be. It just needs some trimming, extra words, extra notes, etc... and you my friend would have a super respectable track.

 

Thanks a lot!
And as promised: the bandcamp upload that retains more details

there's already a lot going on (additional guitars, acoustic guitars, synths - total of 69 tracks (not counting busses)and I've set myself a limit of ~80), more words/notes would lead to the track collapsing imho especially because of its tempo. Except maybe for sprinkling in some pling-ploingish-stuff just for two bars or so but that's just not my kind of thing not even to make it a superduperworldwide hit.

 

Man that ending is great

 

Classy outro moosh

Nice choon

 

I like the song, but I love the bassist's hat

 

awesome stuff

By trimming - I mean removing words (I think a bit less in certain places would have great effect) the same goes for notes.

Wasn't suggesting that you would have to try to make it a super duper world wide hit... I think it is good a musical composition and that if it were to become a super world wide hit - it would just do it on its own, those are usually the best kind.

Keep the good work and I too believe that the most important part is that if you make music you should like what make so I agree on that with you 100%.