I very rarely listen Breaks music, this is the first time I write something of this kind.

Made in Reaper.

VST's used: mainly NI Massive, and rea-plugs.

http://soundcloud.com/tune-in-1/fuzzy-flame

http://k004.kiwi6.com/hotlink/qzt9jf0535/fuzzy_flame.mp3

 

:D actually sounds like one of those Native Instruments sound demos.
But not bad at all sound wise. From a Song perspective... I`m not crazy about it. Interesting elements, but I`m missing the "red line" in this one.
I think you should go for more groovy lines with those breaks and just try to keep it interesting. Or make it even more atmospheric and dump the break beat try... atmosphere is pretty great in this one!
When you`re looking for inspiration on breaks and glitches with groovy beats check out Opiuo and ill.Gates. The best Glitch/Break tune I´ve heard in a while is actually a collab between those guys... "TriLLogy - iLL.Gates, Opiuo & Vent" !
I realize, that its not exactly what you`re going, for but it maybe helps the creative process!

Cheers.