Here's my go at it...
I tried vocoloid for the vox.

 

wow thats nice @capitan crunch i wish i had more to say but it just works. your mastering also got better, like its noticeably louder and richer than anything youve entered so far and overall clear, i definitely see growth on that side

yeah idk what else to say, its just nice to listen too; the instrumental specifically is well done, theres not a single thing that stands out or makes the piece imo, everything together as a whole makes it. nice job capitan

 

thx I'm happy you guys like it.

 

I don't like it...I love it!! I don't have the juice today, but I'll let you know why in a coupla days my heartfelt review.