ForePlay Redux

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  1. incognito

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    Hey Guys,

    I've been off the grid for a while but I'm back. Here's the latest version of my song 'ForePlay'
    I am about to send it to the record labels so please let me know your thoughts.
    THANK YOU!!!

    Here's the link: http://www.playstopgo.com/temp/ForePlay.mp3

    All the best!
     
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  3. Calcatian

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    now even more awesome sounding *yes*
     
  4. bbater

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    Wow... not my style of music at all, but this is really well done; I enjoyed listening to it. Best of luck as you send it out to the labels!
     
  5. thepopenale

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    S'cool! I like it but maybe you should do something with the vox to show the transition from verse to chorus? Layer a hi-pass lofi vocal over the original vox. What would probably work better for this particular track though would just be some harmony lines, panned and 'verbed.

    Overall I like it a lot.
     
  6. One Reason

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    I think I like the initial version better to be honest...altho, still a great track.

    and hey, I thought your going to introduce us to the vocalist 'next week'... weeks ago :dunno:
     
  7. Rolma

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    One reason,
    A bit off-topic, and maybe a bit cheese from my side, this might cover the wait :rofl:
    http://audioz.info/samples/32999-download_coollider-presents-instrumentals-vol6.html
     
  8. One Reason

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    lol... very cute Rolma :rofl:
     
  9. incognito

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    Thank you guys! I really appreciate the comments!

    One Reason, could you please let me know what you liked in the previous version better? (here is the older version again: http://www.playstopgo.com/temp/ForePlayOriginal.mp3)

    Yes, I promised to introduce the singer a while ago. Her name is Ally Sereda and you can visit her website at: http://allysereda.com
     
  10. One Reason

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    I will listen to both on the way to an AA meeting, and reply later.

    I'm trying to decide which I like better, the song, or how she performs it.


    Cheers :) :grooves:
     
  11. One Reason

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    Hmm, its nothing much really, the Redux track just seems more dancey and im not font of the long stuttering at the end of a couple of phrases, preferred the original.

    Also, adding redux on the end, seems, well, sorta cliche and overused.

    All in all its a great track tho, I love it, I wish u luck.

    :grooves:
     
  12. zspin.stomp.shuffle

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    This song has great potential for orchestral harmony, longer buildup, even a major melody line and sound fx but it's pretty good.
     
  13. incognito

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    Thank you guys! You rock!
    By the way, Redux is not part of the title. It just means revisited, since I posted my track before.
    I made another version which is closer to the original. Please let me know which version you prefer.

    Version 1 (more trancy).
    http://playstopgo.com/temp/ForePlay.mp3

    Version 2.
    http://playstopgo.com/temp/ForeplayNoDelay.mp3

    I would really appreciate your feedback

    Thank you in advance!!
     
  14. One Reason

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    Version 1. for me.

    The chorus on this song is insanely catchy. :wink:

    sooo let the beat drop :dancing: :grooves:
     
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    version1 i like..
     
  16. incognito

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    Thank you guys! I appreciate all your comments!
    Here's the final version. Get it while it's hot! :)
    http://playstopgo.com/temp/ForePlay.mp3
     
  17. One Reason

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    I have to say...






    ...Brilliant. :wink:
     
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    Nice, original vocals are good. Final version, high production, you don't over complicate things, keeping it simple makes it better. Nice work :wink:
     
  19. incognito

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    Thank you. I appreciate that!
     
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    Thanks again! :)
     
  21. incognito

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    Hi again!
    Here's the youtube link with cover art. Let me know what you think :)

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n-9U0mwDZFE

    Cheers!
     
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