Hey Guys,

I've been off the grid for a while but I'm back. Here's the latest version of my song 'ForePlay'
I am about to send it to the record labels so please let me know your thoughts.
THANK YOU!!!

Here's the link: http://www.playstopgo.com/temp/ForePlay.mp3

All the best!

 

now even more awesome sounding *yes*

 

Wow... not my style of music at all, but this is really well done; I enjoyed listening to it. Best of luck as you send it out to the labels!

 

S'cool! I like it but maybe you should do something with the vox to show the transition from verse to chorus? Layer a hi-pass lofi vocal over the original vox. What would probably work better for this particular track though would just be some harmony lines, panned and 'verbed.

Overall I like it a lot.

 

I think I like the initial version better to be honest...altho, still a great track.

and hey, I thought your going to introduce us to the vocalist 'next week'... weeks ago

 

One reason,
A bit off-topic, and maybe a bit cheese from my side, this might cover the wait
http://audioz.info/samples/32999-download_coollider-presents-instrumentals-vol6.html

 

lol... very cute Rolma

 

Thank you guys! I really appreciate the comments!

One Reason, could you please let me know what you liked in the previous version better? (here is the older version again: http://www.playstopgo.com/temp/ForePlayOriginal.mp3)

Yes, I promised to introduce the singer a while ago. Her name is Ally Sereda and you can visit her website at: http://allysereda.com

 

I will listen to both on the way to an AA meeting, and reply later.

I'm trying to decide which I like better, the song, or how she performs it.


Cheers

 

Hmm, its nothing much really, the Redux track just seems more dancey and im not font of the long stuttering at the end of a couple of phrases, preferred the original.

Also, adding redux on the end, seems, well, sorta cliche and overused.

All in all its a great track tho, I love it, I wish u luck.

 

This song has great potential for orchestral harmony, longer buildup, even a major melody line and sound fx but it's pretty good.

 

Thank you guys! You rock!
By the way, Redux is not part of the title. It just means revisited, since I posted my track before.
I made another version which is closer to the original. Please let me know which version you prefer.

Version 1 (more trancy).
http://playstopgo.com/temp/ForePlay.mp3

Version 2.
http://playstopgo.com/temp/ForeplayNoDelay.mp3

I would really appreciate your feedback

Thank you in advance!!

 

Version 1. for me.

The chorus on this song is insanely catchy.

sooo let the beat drop :dancing:

 

version1 i like..

 

Thank you guys! I appreciate all your comments!
Here's the final version. Get it while it's hot!
http://playstopgo.com/temp/ForePlay.mp3

 

I have to say...






...Brilliant.

 

Nice, original vocals are good. Final version, high production, you don't over complicate things, keeping it simple makes it better. Nice work

 

Thank you. I appreciate that!

 

Thanks again!

 

Hi again!
Here's the youtube link with cover art. Let me know what you think

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n-9U0mwDZFE

Cheers!