Flowmotion

Discussion in 'Our Music' started by aschnt, Sep 16, 2023.

  1. aschnt

    aschnt Platinum Record

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    Hi all,

    Here's a small track I've just made. If you have any critics, please feel free. How would you hear it improved ?
    For whomever this resonates with ! Love u :)

     
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  3. reticular

    reticular Producer

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    Track is dope, the low end is thick!!
     
  4. tzzsmk

    tzzsmk Audiosexual

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    for my taste, low end seems kinda wobbly and unspecific, it would deserve to hit harder and shorter imo,
    I'd suggest observing following references:



     
  5. aschnt

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    You mean the bassline ? Making it less present but not in level ? That's a good point. It's essentially there for the rythm, maybe too much. I'll see how it feels. Thanks a lot ! :)
     
  6. GTBweli

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    this would make a bangin geometry dash level lol i rlly like it it seems very rythm based and thats why i thought it would be good for that but for listening... IT IS AMAZINGG (slapper)

    EDIT: (I made an account just to tell u this ;))
     
  7. aschnt

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    Geometry dash is a rythmic game ?? Neve really looked into it, thanks man, I'll check that too then! Maybe you also knew Tap Tap Revenge some years ago ? Since Disney bought it and closed it, days are no longer the same !
    Welcome :) ! I'm honored this track is the reason of your account creation
     
  8. tzzsmk

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    combination of bassline and kick
    :hillbilly:
     
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