I did it ! These are the first two tracks with lyrics that I completed.
I know they both have their little problems, but trying to fix every problem was the reason I couldn't finish my tracks.

Now, I'm looking for some general feedback from you guys

One last thing, my friends listened to them, and strangely enough, the guys prefer Predator, while the girls prefer Melting Ice, and I'm not really sure why...

 

really tough call... but i just preferred melting ice.
ask me tomorrow and i might say predator
both really good!

 

both of them are cool, indeed."Melting Ice" is more groovy

 

Melting Ice here too, its just generally easier to listen to and for me it has more interesting and dynamic structure, also preferring the vox, not quite as flowery, more natural.......both have an 80's vibe, and both ok tracks for a first & second with lyrics........nice moosh

 

I will go with the predator i like it because you released your voice there and i like the way of singing! wish you all the best!

 

Good job. Great productions! Keep them coming...

When I was listening to predator I was imagining your voice on a future bass style track

 

Last edited: Jan 14, 2017

Yes, both Nice!
just do something for "Melting" on 2:15s
to much bass on vocal.
Good luck Fowly