First Synthwave/Retrowave Track, can you feedback me?

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  1. memex

    memex Kapellmeister

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    Hello again! this time i bring to you a new track, my first song of this style, hope you enjoy this and feel the 80's vibe again.
    Please let me know what is your opinion about this!


     
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  3. No Avenger

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    Me sees no track. :unsure:

    EDIT: It's there now, listening...

    punchy drums...nice synths...break could benefit from lead sound...ah, there it is...cutting through single sound on the right side (had already been there earlier), maybe a bit too cutting through?...nice. :yes:
     
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  4. Recoil

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    I like this composition already, nice :like:
     
  5. memex

    memex Kapellmeister

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    try to open in chrome!
     
  6. famouslut

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    The gatedness and squiggliness made me giggle after a few bars, so well done. Those hihats got a bit annoying after the same amount of time. But not tooooo much. Just need a bit moar (dotted / triplety) variety? Snare needed a load of 80s verb when it's moar isolated, maybe? Sounds super synthwavey tho! God, those toms :D Enjoyed...
     
  7. Citrik Acid

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    Ho nice man, but it's maybe me who don't know this genre but where is the bass?
     
  8. EAR TO LEARN

    EAR TO LEARN Producer

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    Haven't commented on anyones track yet. I have to say I love the kick and snare. It's decent for a first attempt at a genre (not being cocky I'm bloody terrible at the stuff I've spent years on :( ) Would you mind telling me where the drums are from. I think the snare is lovely. Once again, good work :wink:
     
  9. KungPaoFist

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    I don't have the benefit of studio monitors on this computer but on my headphones I'm liking the sonic quality:like:. Imo you could totally develop this more since its going in an awesome direction:wink:
     
  10. ampworks

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    pretty good, the snare can get a bit repetative after time, maybe a drop out half way though, with a sound that sounds slightly diffrent
     
  11. m9cao

    m9cao Producer

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    the composition was fine, ok, not bad, the synth pad sounds good, but the kick was too heavy and dirty, the snare sound has very worse quality, try another sample, and the pluck sound has worst resonance should eq them down, the overall track has weird reverb
     
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