never tried this before..

http://soundcloud.com/un-sound/traveller

..don't know how it sounds to others... what do you think?

 

Love it! Keep it up!!!

 

It's good but kinda repetitive and I did expect some more organic elements.

 

Very talented, atmospheric, and intense... (I like the intensity of your music a lot ).
Also this one is so different from your previous posts
Maybe, the last few mins are a bit dispersed (like lossing a bit the main idea...but I suppouse it's because the lenght of the track...is massive)
All in all, this one of my favs!

 

Nicely done however I would not describe your track as cinematic, then I guess it depends what your definition is of what makes a track "cinematic". I feel it a bit too electronic and lacks orchestral sound to have that film sound. Furthermore I would recommend that you write to picture if you really want to do cinematic style then your musical decision are based on the picture and the editing which is what a film composer deals with and not purely in terms of music. That's why film music is not square, changes tempo, meter and often unpredictable because it's tailored to picture.
Take a scene from a movie and redo the music for it then the result will likely be more cinematic. Have fun!

 

I like it

Reminds me of a modern day tangerine dream or something?

 

thank you so much for your constructive feedback!

after some days off I really must say that I have to do some changes.

ok, this one never was intented to be a Howard Shore-like bombastic kind of soundtrack thing etc. I'm not able to do that. I'm no real composer, just a friend of (good) music trying to explore the world of sounds ...
"cinematic" was just one of my first associations when I started with the guitar/piano part.
I just wanted to create a kind of blend between orchestral/percussive/acoustic and electronic elements.. ambient.. experimental.
but all that hihat-ish and high percussive stuff is too continuous. it needs much more variation. and the track needs to be shorter... 5 minutes should be ok...

thanks again guys... much appreciated!