After a long time I'm finally making music again. Took me some time to get back, and now Im facing the possibility I'll soon wont have enough time for this hobby again.

The last few days I worked on this track, and I would love some feedack:

http://soundcloud.com/someonesmusic/nowarnofearnopainitsperfect-beta

composition, strucutre, sounds, mixing, melody... what do you think of it, what do you think could be improved?

 

Nice atmo, nice vocal, i dont like the drums man!
On mixing i ear all too much closed

 

All the drums? What exactly dont you like? What do you think should be improved

what exactly do you mean by that? How would you improve it?

Thanks for your feedback

 

I think that he means the drums are too forward or too separated from the rest of the bed. They're also kinda thin. The background is dense and the difference in presence is a bit too striking.