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  1. grizz

    grizz Member

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    Just Looking for some feedback on this track i remixed for Tito Lopez
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  3. Kookaboo

    Kookaboo Rock Star

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    Hi grizz - the voice sounds good and clear.
    What's clearly missing are the deep bass frequencies.
    Also the drum has not enough punch!
    I suggest you to make sure that the kick drum does not
    interfere too much with the synth-bass.

    Good luck!

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  4. Pm5

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    Transients are a bit soft (snares especially), I agree with Kook on this.
    Maybe it's my headphones (on office PC), the left sounds a bit hotter than right ears.
    Goodjob otherwise : very nice strings, cool vocals.
     
  5. grizz

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    thanks alot for the feedback. i will definitely give the drums more punch.. also the deep bass i lowered on purpose due to my speakers so i thought they sounded right but will fix asap
     
  6. grizz

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    i felt the snares were a bit low but wasnt totally sure.. so i gotta up the volume on them.. preciate it
     
  7. fuad

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    the track has excellent flow to it..I agree with the comments above though, the track lacks punch, however, it is not due to lack of low end..I actually think the song is quite sonically balanced..your problem may be due to overcompression robbing your transients. I suggest you go back to your mix..start with your kick and tuned sub bass supplementing your kick..make sure your kick is at least 3dB louder than the rest of the parts of your track..your base should be anywhere 1-3dB lower than your kick as well, use your ears and adjust the bass level accordingly.

    I also think another problem is too much reverb..the track sounds too wet and loose rather than punchy and tight..reduce the amount of reverb on your synths or reduce the tail time. Filter the lows out of the reverb as well up to 200-300Hz..

    hope this helps
     
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    actually it did.. i tried it the way you suggested and it sounds alot better.. preciate it
     
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    kwaszak0 Newbie

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    Nice raping man.
     
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