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  1. sparkles

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    What i learned so far in this track included
    Thank you all for your time,hope you 'll enjoy
     
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  3. peter21

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    Super Track !
    At the start I was like ..okay..nice enough..then the vocals kicked in..boom!
    never heard dnb with vocals like this..
    Nice one :like:
    Thanks for sharing
    cheers
     
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  4. Mynock

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    You make me fell like dancing! :speaker:... :disco:
    Nice vocals! :grooves: :boombox:
    Overall, very cool! :wink:
     
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    Nice song. Can't give technical advice but sounds good. Keep it man
     
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    @sparkles This song rocks bro.:headbang: I always had a soft spot for D & B. Thanks for sharing it with us. Only thing I will suggest production-wise is to add some variation to the drums mainly in the 0:00 to 1:30 section before the vocals. Again, it is a very good song.:like:
     
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    Thank you, if i will take it and work again with it, sure i will try your opinion, thank you :bow::cheers:
     
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    always glad to see one of your tunes m8. Good stuff as always, loved it. :wink:
     
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    Thank you again for sharing.
     
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    By Jove, I think you've got something sparkly and fine there.
     
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    i ll be honest here
    i dont listen to DNB genre ,so here im give it a listen

    i find it attractive intro and sweet low cut keys ,with good kick and bass (i will guess here its around 170-180 bpm )
    the growling bass might be normal for DNB but my ear is too sensitive toward them (sorry)but it lead the TRACK in the beginning
    before the vocals
    the vocals/lyrics :AWESOME ,,its the best part of the song (kudos to the performer/lyricist :like:)

    the music :the second best thing on the track ,its very well made DNB track musically

    the work in the mixing department also did fantastic job :wink:

    even im not a fan of DNB , i would rate it a good score of 7/10

    thanks for sharing sparkles :mates:
     
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    Great work man.Thanks for sharing.
     
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    Vocal samples... really?
    And you all think that's good and original?
    Another one-finger production in one key no less... wow, SO impressive.
     
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    Yes really :yes:,why not ? maybe @sparkles did not have access to a female vocalist at the time he wrote the track :bow:
    & if he finds a female vocalist in his city & records vocals,importing them in his sequencer as a vocal sample cut what would be the difference ?

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    Why you speak for all & not for yourself first ? :bow:
    Yes i find it good :yes: (the track) & also original since @sparkles it the Original Creator of his own music :bow:

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    I've heard an arp movement in the track,a bass progression & a lead melody & vocals :bow: ^,what does this mean ^ ?
    also in a liquid drum & bass track ,you can let it "roll" for 5-7 minutes if you want to making subtile changes with filters or rhythm variations.
    Liquid D&b is also about the vibe/feeling/emotion it transmits more than anything else & this track does it successfully imho :bow:
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    the negativity & dissing of a fellow members track progress surpasses my understating every fucking time :bow:
    Can you please kindly give constructive feedback as how would you produce a liquid drum & bass track & take it to the next level ?

    Have a great day ! :wink::bow:

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    Thank you for sharing ! :wink:

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    I did enjoy it & if the track is more "produced/polished/finalized",
    i can easily see it released on a UK drum & bass Label,like Hospital Records,Shogun Audio & many others :keys:

    Have a great day ! :wink: :bow:
     
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    Bro did you reply in the correct thread? It seems like you was reading another thread came over and mixed your comments. Everyone that has posted here, including me, loves the track. Indeed, I think the only suggestion was made by me and the OP did not seem to have a problem with it. I'm trying to connect the dots here but can't make any connection between the existing posts and your comments.:dunno:
     
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    Hello @The Pirate :bow:,sorry i'm confused,what did i say wrong here ? :dunno:,can you please expand on your thoughts & elaborate ?
    thank you in advance :)
     
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    Brother, now I am more confused than you are. I was referring to this comment:
     
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    Oh i see now :wink::bow:,sorry if my comment felt there wrong to you or aggressive/offensive,that was sincerely not my intension :bow:
    I just don't see how LuckySevens comment would benefit in a positive way Sparkles track(make it better) :bow:,that is all,no bad feelings from me.
    I hope you understood that i like & love Sparkles track :wink:
    I hope you agree that i can share my opinion as any other fellow member here on the forum :)
    If not i can easily don't speak my mind (shut my mouth) & easily disappear :bow:
    @The Pirate :),have a great day,Happy Summer :wink::bow:
     
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    Im the one that has to say "sorry". Since I have that member on my ignored list, I only had the benefit of your replies. :deep_facepalm: That is the reason why I wrote what I wrote. Once again, I m sorry and thank you for the polite reply. :bow:

    Edit: If a person is on your "ignored" list and I quote that person, you cant see that person's quote. Only my reply. Look at the screenshot.

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