feedback on my new song

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  1. goku223344

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    Right now Im in the process of creating an album called Broken Promises. And I just put a single that is a part of that album. I would like feedback on it anything from the instrumental to the lyrics. And also I remixed the instrumental from Drake- From Time. Thank you! :)
     
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  3. LZ Jaydon

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    link? :D
     
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    oh shoot i thought i did lol
     
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    Wow... this is definitely right up my alley. Are those your vocals too or just the music? Beautiful job a creating a mood. Also that change up at 1:42... damn nice.
     
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    thanks! the chorus is not my voice but the verse is
     
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    between 1:42 and 2:00 should be the entire track. That's really really good.
     
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    the chord are awsome betwen 30 and 40 sec you have an fx who just kill my hear maybe you can Eq that :) but dope track bros
     
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    Did you do any editing of DRAKEs track or just play it straight with some verse ?

    This has good potential to get some street rep however you may need a release from DRAKE to use it commercially thou.

    Keep up the good work.
     
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    Very nice mood on this one!
     
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    Nice:wink:

    Drums : too much compression
    Vocal : less reverb will be better
     
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    the part of the song that was straight from him was the chorus between 1:40-2:01 everything else is what I did
     
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    somebody else told me about that too lol, I might try taking out some of the HIs to see if I can get rid of the high pitch
     
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  15. goku223344

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    I didn't mix my vocals on this song, but I'm still looking at other studios for recording
     
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