Hi guys,

So I'm quite new to producing - i've only been chipping away at it for the last few months.

I'm close to completing this track but I know its not quite there yet. Problem is, I've kind of hit a wall with it and I've worked on it for so many hours now that I can't help myself think it's really terrible. That said, I felt like there was a good idea in there somewhere when it started taking off a little, in the earlier stages of me working on it.

I'd be grateful for anyone's feedback on the mixing, the structure and any areas where you guys think it could be improved.

I'm also happy to send around the project file but i know it's pretty shit and it's unlikely for anyone to care that much.

Anyway, I'm grateful for this community and hope to hear any of your thoughts good or bad, so that I can continue to improve.




Thank you all in advance.

 

You are mixing at an ok level if you want to work at -12dB or -18dB. But you should make yourself a little pseudo-loudness chain to stick on your master bus which can give you an idea of what this will actually sound like when you bring it up to your final levels. You can bounce a copy, take some notes about what you want to change if anything and so on. You can render something at this level when you send it to someone for mixing, mastering or whatever; so they have room to work. For Soundcloud or even just the purpose of your post here, you want to bring it up to something close to your full final volume. You will get more feedback, and maybe more accurate feedback too.

 

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Last edited: Jun 3, 2025 at 11:03 AM

I didn't know this, so that's awesome feedback. i'll make sure its much louder for next time. Thanks for the dm too! Legend.

 

Thank you for your response earlier, any chance you can re-share it, I was in a rush to get to work and I remember thinking it was really solid advice and was looking forward to re-reading but it seems you'd deleted it?

Anyway, thanks a lot for commenting and listening in the first place. Means a lot.

 

My feedback concerns both your mix and your arrangement since they are closely linked.

Your main vocal sample sounds a little harsh, like It's low resolution, so not something that could be changed with EQ.(could be Soundcloud's compression). If that's deliberate It's not necessarily a problem, but my first impression Is that It doesn't sit too well with the rest of your sounds.

At the very beginning try making your fade-ins a bit slower and gentler, I feel they are to sudden/fast and rob some of the impact they could have. Your hi-hats seem a little bright to me, but that could just be my taste.

Your synth sounds seem just a tad mid-range heavy. At 0:50 try doing a gentle cut in your synth lead at around 450Hz. -1.5 dB or so could help It sit better during the drop and help the depth perception of your track.

At 1:06 your vocal sample enters in the "and" of the downbeat (the second eight note of the measure). I don't know If that's deliberate, but It kinda threw me off specially since the groove of the track is firmly on the grid.

Then at 1:22 the transition Is a little awkward between bass/no bass and your vocal sample. In general your delay seems to have a set number of repeats that don't fall off too evenly and suddenly stop.

Starting from 2:40 the whole section sounds a little too thin and empty. I understand It works as a "palette cleanser" of sorts, but I'm missing a little something to create some subtle interest.

Aside from that, your track is decent and has some legitimate good ideas. I really like the mid section starting from 1:36, I started to unconsciously bob my head lol. Keep going, I listened to your Californication remix a few days back and you seem to be improving.

Hope this helps you.

 

This is exactly what good feedback looks like to me. Each point needs to be taken into consideration with the DAW open or just even a wav copy of the track. Maybe every point is perfectly on point, or not; but it is at least obvious the writer listened to the track.

 

Last edited: Jun 4, 2025 at 1:52 AM

There's no such thing as a producer, that was back in the day.

I'm a writer producer, you need to write something before you can produce it, all the plugs in da world could not salvage this cos there's nowt there.

You can write a great track using just samples, two free packs on my site, get a drum loop, drop it on bar 8 of 16 bar riff, find a bass loop.

Copy one drum loop on another track, cut the kick drum out of that loop, and put that single kick on every quater note starting at 5 bars then drop it at 8 bars, then start your track wiv, da bass, continue to add & delete parts while extending the track to appropriate length.

Basically, jus copy und paste the arrangement, nothing could be simpler eh?

Before you can produce any work of quality, you need to be able to hear that quality in others work.

You need to learn to walk before you can run, you're barely crawling at da mo'.