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  1. seicaratteri

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    Hello again! I finished another track and I would love to know what you think about it! From the composition to the mixing / mastering :)



    Thanks a lot in advance for taking the time to listen to it! I really appreciate it! :break:

     
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    I think it should be even louder and with even more fat low end! <joke!>
    Damn my speakers are good.

    First drop when the 303/whatever hit I was like Oooo yeah. Unexpected niceness.
    Second drop with the sidechaining was a great touch, with the same emotional effect as before.
    And then the top line synth! Aaaahh.
    So. Great compostion, great Eqing, great mix, and my God the mastering worked!

    Thank you for sharing, and waking me UP in these mf strange timez.
     
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    Wow! Thank you so much for the kind words and the detailed feedback, I really really appreciate it! :) I'm also super happy that the track helped your mood, this is the magic of music! :)
     
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    When I read that, I got the physical heart glow feeling. This is a good sign, thank you.
    If I could tick all the boxes like you, I'd be able to help myself and others ascend so much quicker. But I can't!
    I have to get others to master. And I'm only ever happy until pre-master. After 30+ years of session work, gigging, and writing and recording, my skillset is too honed on writing, playing, and recording.
    I'd even rather leave mixing to someone else! hehe. I'd have more time to get more songs down! I've got so many projects tracked up but unmixed!

    Yes, you've changed my day.
    Thank you.
     
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    Wow! Thank you for the kind words I really really appreciate it! :) and yes I can imagine that after such a long time you do what you have always done, but I also think it's never too late to get into something new, especially in corona times where we might find more time! Maybe you start mixing some of these old projects and a fire burst into you, perhaps you could give it a try! :)

    Thank you so much again! :)
     
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    great
     
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    Thank you so much for taking the time to listen to the song and for the feedback! I really appreciate it :)
     
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    Love it... like the view from behind the wheel of a high speed car at night. :like:
     
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    i dear to say its a pretty decent trance track. mix is a totally ok (could get a 25% better though with a higher level of mastering) and composition/structure is nice, so good work!
     
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    Thanks a lot for your feedback, is highly appreciated! It's very interesting, I can also imagine it in the same setting :)

    And thank you to you as well, very much appreciated! :) one question, just out of curiosity: why would you define this trance? :) to my ears it would rather sound like acid techno
     
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    I'm a rock guy but in the right setting I've enjoyed this kind of music in some discos. Sounds good ;)
     
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    Thanks a lot for the feedback and for taking the time to listen to the track! I wish clubs could still works :)
     
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    Hey l, that's really great! It has me kinda dancing down the street as I walk the dog.
     
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    Hello
    It's a nice track no major negative issues. I am no expert in this genre so my advice might or might not be true but to me it needs maybe a special sound that shines through beside the BD
    I like the 2nd drop best the vocals fit but I don't speak the language to know better
    and maybe ad something to the intro and work more on the 1st drop.
    great work and best of luck
     
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    Good track but the piercing sound at 2.11 your using to make a variance is pulling me out of the rest of the "euphoric buzz"
    Second break could use a lot more ambiance building before the 2nd drop. It's like oh here is the kick again. Doesn't build to it.
     
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    you are welcomed, yeah i felt if was playing in both fields a tiny bit and didnt know where to place it really but i agree. cheers

    i thought the same at first listen but then it turned out (to me) like feeling its all in purpose or at least very much working the way it is, both the massive (now slightly uncontrolled) kick and that detuned sound.

    im sure more work can be done in the mix but them imho it would need to make these elements slightly "better" not alter them radically, rather a sort of mastering touch to create some tightness in the lowfreq more than mixing actually.
     
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  18. seicaratteri

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    Thanks a lot for the feedback, I appreciate it! and I am really happy that was part of your dog walk :)

    Thanks a lot for the detailed feedback, is very much appreciated! I also thought about it, and generally my tracks tend to be much more complex, but for this one I tried to force myself to keep it straight and simple :)

    Thanks a lot as well for you detailed feedback, I really appreciate it and is very helpful! I think you definitely have a point, but as I mentioned above I forced myself to keep the track straight and simple for once - maybe too much? I will definitely keep into consideration for the next one. Thanks a lot again!

    And yes I definitely feel the same you explained it very well! That was the original idea I envisioned for the track! Thanks a lot again :)
     
  19. Bitmonkey

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    Dude that's very clearly techno not trance.

    Really nice composition mate builds and drops nicely. The only slight thing I would say is there seems to be quite a lot of variation in volume as you open the filters you might want to tame the peaks on them a touch with a compressor/limiter so it doesn't get quite so noticeably louder when the filters are fully open. For example listen at 1:47 vs 1:53 its almost if you have gain going up and down or something there are some noticeable changes in the synth volume.

    On a personal note I'd add some white noise perc to add some extra groove in the percussion a touch maybe but thats about it. Good work mate :)
     
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