Feedback needed :)

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  1. seicaratteri

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    Hello all! I finally had the time to finish a new track, I would appreciate some feedback on it!



    Thanks a lot! :)
     
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    Thanks a lot for taking the time to listen to the track and giving me a feedback, I truly appreciate it! :)
     
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    really liked it...
    BTW i like a few from bodzin,romboy,vitalic etc and old stuff
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    what you say on the mix @No Avenger @SineWave
     
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    Really happy to hear that you liked it! :) And yes, it would be amazing to get some feedback about the mix as well if possible!
     
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    very nice tune. i really liked it the kind i would listen to more than once.
    well done
     
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    Thank you so much as well for taking the time to listen to it, I'm really happy you liked it! :)
     
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    [​IMG] That's a smart move.

    I find the main open HH a bit too resonant, would change the perception of the BD a bit and raise the synth, but I like the track, it's cool.
     
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    Thanks a lot for the feedback! I really appreciate it :) I have two questions! could you tell me what BD stands for? and also which synth would you like to hear louder? the main acid one or the background chords?

    Thanks again! :)
     
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    finally a decent song in this forum. Actually all of your soundcloud songs are interesting: bravo
     
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    BD = bass drum.
    I was talking about the lower acid synth, mainly. For me this genre is mainly about the BD :winker:, bass, HH and a lead synth. While you achieved this in the first part, after the break part it's a bit drowned.
     
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    Thank you very much! I am really happy you like my songs, thank you for taking the time to listen to them! :)

    I see, thank you very much for your feedback! It helps a lot :) I will take a look and try to change a bit the BD and the lead synth, thanks again!
     
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    imho .after heard it loud on cheap headphones while sport ..kick a tiny bit louder.. it allready a great kick but bit more bottom umpf on the kick...maybe
    around after the break down the highs was bit to loud

    but great work anyways:grooves::metal:
     
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    Thanks a lot! I really appreciate it :) I also noticed that the kick would need some extra work, I will get back to that!
     
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